Hello elizjeffe1648018, Welcome to Perspective in Landscape Drawing. Congratulations on your two drawings. Would you mind sharing some information [dimensions of sketchpad, type of paper, pencils, process, insights,] etc about these two drawings so that I can give a more informed criticism? Look forward to hearing from you soon.
My sketch pad size is 9x12, heavy weight drawing paper, pencils ere a HB, 4b, and a H to sketch in my drawing. I did a quick sketch for placement and then continued, trying out different mark making with my pencils. I now have more selection for pencils to try out. Both drawings are done from sitting on a log in my yard.