Hi. I think maybe the eyes are a little too wide. The head should about 5 eyes width. From outside corner of eye to side of head I think should be 1 eyes width. I can see real progress here so please keep at it.
Thank you for the critics :) i agree.. It's just hard to erase and re-do with canvass cuz it will be messy. Thank you for your advice :) will try to do better next time