Patrick Connors asked:
[criticism continued] The fabric should be darker about half way between what it is now and the value of the opening. Last, please note the dark value under the buggy. The buggy and the ground do not have any "reason" that dark moment. Lighten it somewhat since it is a cast shadow and continue it to the left since the scene is being lit with the sun at above and to the right. By darkening or placing a line around it, as is around the shirt on the clothes line you will flatten that immediate space unless the tonal structure can support the line. All-in-all, well done. I look forward to the posting of your next drawing.