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Second Picture For Walk On The Beach

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Perspective in Landscape Drawing taught by Patrick Connors

Master linear perspective and learn to draw landscapes accurately using simple tools and classic techniques.

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Hello katidamor, I left the comment in the second posting of this drawing.

01/08/2014 Flag

I reposted the drawing here, now it looks more like what I have on my paper., sorry about the confusion.

01/10/2014 Flag

Hello katidamor, Your perseverance paid off, this is much different than the previously posted images and it is a good white chalk and charcoal [?] on toned paper. In looking at the drawing it seems that the subject matter is about the figures, and, in particular, the foreground figure on the beach. To that end, it may have been of use to consider placing the eye-level line somewhat lower in the composition. This would give a different relationship to the space, one that would probably give them compositional dominance. That being said, the distant house and trees on the horizon work well. There is an atmospheric feeling to the entire drawing, especially in the distance. Be careful of the lines and tones describing the retreating water on the beach. The top line behind the two central figures is good but the next one starts out a but dodgy although it gets better as it goes to the horizon. The one to the left of the front figure needs to be rethought.

01/13/2014 Flag

[criticism continued] All-in-all a good drawing depicting the principles presented in Lesson 7, Atmospheric Perspective. I look forward to seeing the posting of your next drawing.

01/13/2014 Flag

Thank you for your extensive critique, I really appreciate the time you take with each of us.

01/15/2014 Flag